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Biography:Revising and Editing
Mr. Griot models how to use a rubric to revise the first draft of his biography and how to use the proofreading checklist to proofread and edit his writing.
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Revising and editing 'Animal farm' essays
Pupil outcome: I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay. Key learning points: - Topic sentences need to be clear and linked to the question. - Main and supporting quotations from the text are used to justify...
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The Process of Writing a Long Report
This video provides a step-by-step guide on the process of writing a long report. It covers topics such as choosing a relevant topic, conducting research, writing a thesis statement, preparing an outline, drafting, revising and editing,...
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Including Stories and Examples in Body Paragraphs
This video lesson teaches students how to add detail to their informational writing by incorporating stories and examples in their body paragraphs. It emphasizes the importance of being specific and including as many details as possible...
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Revising Your Persuasive Speech: Connecting Evidence to Your Thesis Statement
In this video, the teacher explains how to ensure that the evidence in a persuasive speech aligns with the thesis statement. The lesson covers the importance of strong thesis statements, the three stages of the writing process, and three...
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Organizing Ideas and Evidence in a Persuasive Essay
In this video, the teacher explains how to make a persuasive opinion essay easy to read by organizing ideas and evidence using paragraph form. The teacher emphasizes the importance of having clear topic sentences and provides examples of...
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Organizing Ideas and Evidence in a Persuasive Essay: Using Paragraph Form
In this video, the teacher provides a step-by-step guide on how to make a persuasive essay easy to read and well-organized. The lesson covers the importance of stating a claim and providing evidence, as well as the three steps of the...
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Creating a Memorable Conclusion for Your Persuasive Essay
In this video, the teacher explains how to make a persuasive essay memorable by focusing on the conclusion. The teacher guides the students through the revision and editing process, emphasizing the importance of a clear ending that...
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Let’s Make It Better!
Mr. Griot models using a rubric and proofreading checklist to revise and edit a story.
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Improving Your Written Response: Rereading and Revising
In this video, the teacher explains the importance of revising and editing written responses to ensure they are focused and clear. The teacher guides students through the process of rereading their writing, checking if it aligns with the...
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Mastering Track Changes and Comments in Word for Effective Document Collaboration
This video provides a comprehensive tutorial on using the Track Changes and Comments features in Microsoft Word to facilitate the proofreading and editing process of documents. The instructor demonstrates how to turn on Track Changes,...
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Editing descriptive writing based on ‘A monster within’
Pupil outcome: I can edit, revise and rewrite my descriptive writing. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making technical corrections to a piece of writing. - Accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar is essential to help...
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Improving Your Persuasive Opinion Essay: Reconsidering the Order of Evidence
In this video, the teacher discusses how to make a persuasive opinion essay more convincing by reorganizing the supporting evidence. They explain the importance of claims and provide examples, and also review the writing process of...
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TOPIC SENTENCE: The Best Ways to Begin a Body Paragraph (8 Steps for Beginners)
Struggling to write a topic sentence? Are you trying to figure out how to start your body paragraph?
In this video, I give you eight easy steps to writing both an advanced and basic topic sentence. First, I review THREE...
In this video, I give you eight easy steps to writing both an advanced and basic topic sentence. First, I review THREE...
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The Amazing Writing Process
“The Amazing Writing Process” is a video that provides an overview of the five steps of the writing process. The five steps include prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing.
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The Writing Process
In this video, students are introduced to the writing process, a step by step guide to help writers tackle this subject. Young writers are encouraged to follow the process and create excellent writing.
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Proofreading and redrafting a speech
Pupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a persuasive speech to improve it. Key learning points: - Proof-reading is an active process, that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Reading your work aloud can...
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Choosing a Writing Topic for an Informational Text
In this video, the teacher explains how to choose a writing topic for an informational text by asking questions about your interests. The importance of selecting non-fiction topics with factual resources is emphasized, and the three...
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Reconsidering Paragraph Order in Persuasive Writing
This video is a lesson on how to decide the order of paragraphs in a persuasive speech. The teacher guides students through the process of generating ideas, writing drafts, and revising and editing their reasons. They emphasize the...
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Proving Your Point: Using Evidence to Support Your Thesis
In this video, the teacher explains how to prove a point using evidence. They emphasize the importance of having strong feelings about the topic in order to effectively prove one's thinking. The teacher also guides the students through...
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Finalizing Writing
A video entitled “Finalizing Writing” which explores three steps of the writing process: revising, editing, and publishing.
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How to Show Personal Growth in Your Writing
In this video, the teacher discusses the importance of revealing something about oneself in a personal narrative. They explain the writing process and guide students on how to revise their drafts to show personal growth and change.
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Refining descriptions with semantic fields, present participles, and semicolons
Pupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a descriptive piece to improve it. Key learning points: - Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Changing your verbs and nouns...
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Behind the scenes | FuseSchool
Behind the scenes | FuseSchool At FuseSchool, we are passionate about creating fun and informative educational videos. In this video we go behind the scenes to have a look at what it takes to bring you your favorite FuseSchool videos....