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Bill Carmody
The Process of Writing a Long Report
This video provides a step-by-step guide on the process of writing a long report. It covers topics such as choosing a relevant topic, conducting research, writing a thesis statement, preparing an outline, drafting, revising and editing,...
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Editing paragraphs of a narrative in 'Whale Rider'
Pupil outcome: I can edit the opening and build-up of a narrative in 'Whale Rider'. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - To edit punctuation, missing or incorrectly used capital...
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Finalizing Writing
A video entitled “Finalizing Writing” which explores three steps of the writing process: revising, editing, and publishing.
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Editing
Editing explores the important elements of the editing step of the writing process.
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Peer editing the paragraph about King Tut’s death
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's section about the death of King Tut in a non-chronological report. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by oneself,...
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The Writing Process: Creating a Picture Book of Community Heroes
Join us in this lesson as we learn all about the writing process. The writing process is a step by step guide to help us take an idea and turn it into a written masterpiece. Start from the beginning and take baby steps, writing doesn't...
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Editing descriptive writing based on ‘A monster within’
Pupil outcome: I can edit, revise and rewrite my descriptive writing. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making technical corrections to a piece of writing. - Accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar is essential to help...
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Improving Your Written Response: Rereading and Revising
In this video, the teacher explains the importance of revising and editing written responses to ensure they are focused and clear. The teacher guides students through the process of rereading their writing, checking if it aligns with the...
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Organizing Ideas and Evidence in a Persuasive Essay
In this video, the teacher explains how to make a persuasive opinion essay easy to read by organizing ideas and evidence using paragraph form. The teacher emphasizes the importance of having clear topic sentences and provides examples of...
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Improving Your Persuasive Opinion Essay: Reconsidering the Order of Evidence
In this video, the teacher discusses how to make a persuasive opinion essay more convincing by reorganizing the supporting evidence. They explain the importance of claims and provide examples, and also review the writing process of...
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Creating a Memorable Conclusion for Your Persuasive Essay
In this video, the teacher explains how to make a persuasive essay memorable by focusing on the conclusion. The teacher guides the students through the revision and editing process, emphasizing the importance of a clear ending that...
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Editing the build-up of 'The Viewer'
Pupil outcome: I can edit the build-up of ‘The Viewer’. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of improving writing to ensure text flow and overall quality. - Editing involves making improvements to a piece of writing without...
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Editing a persuasive letter about school uniform
Pupil outcome: I can edit a persuasive letter about school uniform. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of improving writing to ensure text flow and overall quality. - Editing involves making improvements to a piece of writing...
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Editing narrative writing based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'
Pupil outcome: I can edit my narrative writing based on 'How To Train Your Dragon'. Key learning points: - Editing is a vital element of the writing process. - When editing, we must be selective about which parts of our writing to...
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Editing a section of narrative writing based on 'The Borrowers'
Pupil outcome: I can edit a section of narrative writing based on 'The Borrowers'. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve writing. - The job of an editor is to check punctuation and to make...
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Editing instructions for how to make a monster pizza
Pupil outcome: I can edit and improve my instructions for making a monster pizza. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making any changes needed to improve our writing. - Punctuation is the name for the marks used to make our...
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Writing the introduction of a non-chronological report about aye-ayes
Pupil outcome: I can use a plan to write the introduction of a non-chronological report about aye-ayes. Key learning points: - The purpose of the introduction is to engage the reader and give them general information about the report's...
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Writing the introduction of a non-chronological report about tigers
Pupil outcome: I can use a plan to write the introduction of a non-chronological report about tigers. Key learning points: - The purpose of the introduction is to engage the reader and give them general information about the report's...
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Peer editing the opening of a narrative based on 'Jabberwocky'
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's opening paragraph of a narrative based on ‘Jabberwocky'. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by oneself, with a peer...
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Peer editing a persuasive letter
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's persuasive letters. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by oneself, with a peer or with a teacher. - When editing...
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Peer editing a narrative scene based on 'The BFG'
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's opening paragraph of a narrative based on ‘The BFG'. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by oneself, with a peer or...
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Peer editing the paragraph about diet
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's section about diet in a non-chronological report about healthy lifestyle. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by...
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Editing the first half of a non-chronological report about Anglo-Saxons
Pupil outcome: I can edit the introduction and first section of a non-chronological report. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve writing. - When editing punctuation, missing or incorrect punctuation,...
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Editing the second half of a non-chronological report about Anglo-Saxons
Pupil outcome: I can edit the second section and conclusion of a non-chronological report. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve writing. - When editing punctuation, missing or incorrect punctuation,...