Sophia Learning
Sophia: Revising an Introduction
This video lesson focuses on revising an introduction. It explains what makes an introduction successful, what makes an introduction unsuccessful, and what to look for when revising an introduction. It then demonstrates how to revise two...
Sophia Learning
Sophia: Revision Techniques: Eliminating Excess
This video lesson focuses on eliminating wordiness in writing. It offers strategies to make your writing more concise and precise: using precise language, reducing clauses to phrases, removing excess phrasing, and removing words that...