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Sophia: Revising a Thesis Statement
This video lesson focuses on revising and editing your paper, especially your thesis statement. It outlines a 3-step process in which the writer reads and answers specific questions about the body of the paper, then answers questions...
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Sophia: Revision Techniques: Using a Professor's Notes
This video lesson focuses on using the notes and comments written on returned papers to improve future writing. It includes why you should look at them, common symbols and proofreaders marks and their meanings, the order of importance to...
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Learn Zillion: Revising a Narrative Response for Clarity
In this lesson, you will learn how to make sure your writing is focused on the topic by rereading and asking yourself, "Is this clear? Have I followed my roadmap?" [5:16]
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Sophia: Goals of Revision
This lesson introduces the importance of revision in the writing process. [6:46] CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.W.5; CCSS.ELA-Literacy.WHST.6-8.5 Develop and strengthen writing
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Learn Zillion: Revise a Persuasive Letter Draft
In this lesson, you will learn how to revise your writing by rereading your draft and thinking, "Is this what I really meant to say?" [4:48]
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Learn Zillion: Revise a Constructed Response Using Transition and "Wow" Words
In this lesson, you will learn to strengthen your writing by using linking words and "wow" words. [5:22]
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Learn Zillion: Revise to Include Dialogue and Inner Thinking
In this lesson, you will learn how to develop events in a narrative by including dialogue and character's thoughts. [6:17]
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Learn Zillion: Revising an Opinion Letter for Focus
In this lesson, you will learn how to make sure your writing is focused on the prompt by using the prompt as you review your work. [6:30]
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Learn Zillion: Revising Writing to Be More Concise
In this lesson, you will learn how to revise your persuasive speech by rereading to make sure your evidence supports your thesis statement. [5:13]
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Learn Zillion: Revising a Constructed Response Answer
In this lesson, you will learn how to polish your answer by avoiding repetitive words and phrases. [5:11]
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Learn Zillion: Choose Interesting Adjectives and Adverbs
Add adjectives and adverbs to help you express your ideas precisely. [8:00]
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Learn Zillion: Revise a Narrative Story by Rereading the Draft
In this lesson, you will learn how to revise a narrative reading response by rereading and asking yourself, 'What details can I add to make my story stronger and are there any details I can remove?' Login gives access to a slideshow as...
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Learn Zillion: Revise the Order of Paragraphs in Arugmentative Writing
In this lesson, you will learn how to reconsider the order of your paragraphs by determining a logical and connected journey of thought. [5:45]
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Learn Zillion: Revise for Correct Use of Facts and Opinions
This lesson takes students through a revision process focused on correct use of facts and opinions. [8:08]
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Learn Zillion: Group Related Information Together
Writers organize information to make their writing clear. Let's practice revising our writing to make sure our ideas are grouped properly into paragraphs. [10:47]
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Learn Zillion: Bring Characters to Life Using Details
In this lesson, you will learn how to bring characters to life in a story by using details such as thoughts, feelings, actions, and dialogue. [8:01]
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Learn Zillion: Revise an Informational Paragraph
In this lesson, you will learn how to strengthen your writing by revising your draft. Login gives access to a slideshow as well. [8:12]
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Learn Zillion: Revise Argumentative Writing by Reorganizing Evidence
In this lesson, you will learn how to strengthen your argument by better organizing the evidence being presented. [4:15]
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Learn Zillion: Use Specific Words to Describe Events and Setting
In this lesson, students use precise words and phrases to create mental images for their readers, and practice adding specific words to make the writing come alive. [9:29]
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Learnzillion: Use Domain Specific Vocabulary
In this Learnzillion lesson, students will understand the importance of using domain-specific vocabulary instead of vague word choices in their writing. [5:17]
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Pbs Learning Media: The Night Manager: Molly of Denali
Molly is determined to check-in a new group of visitors to the Trading Post in this 11-minute animated story, [25:25] "The Night Manager," from the PBS KIDS series MOLLY OF DENALI. When Molly follows the instructions in the Trading...
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Learn Zillion: Show, Don't Tell
In this lesson, you will learn how to make your story more realistic and exciting by showing, not telling. [8:27]
Sophia Learning
Sophia: Revision Techniques: Peer Feedback
This video is an instructional writing lesson to teach students how to revise a paper based on another peer's feedback. The instructor provides three steps to follow after peer feedback is given. The instructor also provides additional...
Sophia Learning
Sophia: Revision Techniques: Peer Feedback
This video is an instructional writing lesson to teach students how to revise a paper based on another peer's feedback. The instructor provides three steps to follow after peer feedback is given. The instructor also provides additional...