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\nPupil outcome: I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay. Key learning points: - Topic sentences need to be clear and linked to the question. - Main and supporting quotations from the text are used to justify...\nPupil outcome: I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay. Key learning points: - Topic sentences need to be clear and linked to the question. - Main and supporting quotations from the text are used to justify arguments. - Responses should avoid re-telling the plot. - Revising and editing your essays is an important part of the writing process. - Analysis should be linked to the writer’s purpose and comment on choices.\n
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29:25
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Pre-K - Higher Ed
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Social Studies & History
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2023
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English
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