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\nIn this video, the teacher discusses the importance of revising introductions in order to grab the reader's attention. They provide a draft of a story and guide the viewer through the process of deleting unnecessary details to make the...\nIn this video, the teacher discusses the importance of revising introductions in order to grab the reader's attention. They provide a draft of a story and guide the viewer through the process of deleting unnecessary details to make the introduction more concise and engaging. The teacher emphasizes the need to move the story forward naturally and keep the reader interested. The viewer is then encouraged to apply these revision techniques to their own writing.\n
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8:40
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K - 5th
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Subjects
English Language Arts
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Instructional Videos
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\nLearnZillion ELA\n\n
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2015
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English
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For Teacher Use
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Fine Print: Educational Use
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setting, details, colorado, sentences
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